How to Write a Great Screenplay Treatment

Screenwriters Network, July 10, 2021

Why do you need a treatment for your screenplay? It’s a long and often painstaking journey just to get a first draft complete and on to the page, why would you want to put time and effort into writing additional documents?

The truth is, having a great story idea is only a starting point, and regardless of your experience and expertise, you’re going to need help to get organized. 

Having a strong structure to hold all your ideas, moments, and plots together, allows you to write with greater confidence, efficiency, and motivation. Every feature script I’ve personally written has either started by first planning it with a treatment, or I’ve used it to help solve story issues in my later drafts.

 

What is a treatment?

A treatment is a relatively brief written pitch of a story intended to be dramatized for a film or television.

It’s is a way to explore the storylines, characters, and plots, and get a clearer idea of how it all ties together. The economy of a good treatment helps you quickly see the bigger picture and overall structure of your story, allowing you to uncover potential flaws and weak points. It also helps you get a deeper understanding of your characters and their unique set of desires and struggles, and experiment with how all your storylines are sewn together.

If you already know your story in intricate detail, or even have a quality draft on the page, a well-written treatment can become the calling card for the script. It is an excellent format to pitch your film idea at an early stage, and seduce others to read, fund, and even produce your project.

A treatment is a narrative-prose telling of a screenplay. There is no set length or format, but it should clearly lay out the story arc and subplots. It should be concise and economical in its language, giving an easy-to-follow account of the full story.

 

The uses of a treatment

Pre-writing

If you’re using a treatment to test out an idea, then you should write it without worrying about contradictions or flaws at this stage. Write it on the page and let it flow. Like screenwriting, the treatment itself will need to be drafted and redrafted. The time and effort you spend working on it will pay off 10-fold when you sit down to write, having a solid structure and story arc which will keep you organised and on track.

Pitching ideas

If you’re writing a treatment to pitch your idea, you need to bear the reader in mind. You still want this document to tell the story in a somewhat matter-of-fact and economical way, but you may want to add something to express the tone and style of the end script. The aim is to give the reader a clear understanding of your story, it must be easy to follow and understand. 

 

How long is a treatment?

I have seen examples that are 1 page in length, and others 20+ pages long. It can vary but is usually from 3 – 15 pages. It is advised to keep it between 5 and 10 pages as studies have shown in the industry they average between these numbers.

 

How to structure a treatment

There is no set structure or industry-standard format for how a treatment needs to be. You can be creative and playful, but it should certainly be centered around telling the story in a clear and easy-to-follow manner. Even when you are using it to pitch your project, I would avoid adding too much flair or styling in the way you tell the story and focus on covering all the core details and laying out the plot lines.

You can break it down as follows:

  • Title
  • Logline 
  • Characters
  • Story
  • Concept

 

How to write a film treatment

Title

Titles are important, it’s the first impression most films make but don’t overthink it at an early stage. It can become an obsession trying to find the perfect title for your project, but many films won’t find their final title until well into production (or even after it). If you don’t yet have a title give it a ‘working title’ which is original and sets the right tone.

 

Logline 

This needs to be a sentence or short, punchy paragraph, which summarizes your story. This is less necessary when you are using a treatment to plan a first draft, but it is certainly beneficial to write it even at this early stage. 

In fact, the logline is often the first thing I will do, and I’ll put a lot of thought and effort into creating one I’m happy with. It’s easier said than done, but focusing on telling your story in one sentence can create that crucial first building block.

If you just can’t nail the tagline at this early stage, one way of cheating it is to use other film comparisons. E.g. ‘It’s a classic Western, set in space’ – Star Wars. 

 

Story

The story section can be broken down into acts or even scenes. I like to start by planning my story in 5 acts, like an extended synopsis, and later expand this into something closer to a scene-by-scene outline.  

As this is the most important part of the treatment, I use a technique of slowly building up my story, starting with the logline. Once you’re happy with your logline, telling your story in 1 sentence, you can then expand it to telling your story in three sentences:

  • Set up
  • Conflict
  • Conclusion

I will try to be economical and rewrite those sentences within 25 words each. Again, it’s not an easy task and can take a lot of time and brainstorming, but I know there is a payoff to this method. From there I’ll expand it to 5 sentences:

  • Introduction (set up of characters/world)
  • Inciting incident (the event that kickstarts the story)
  • Highetening incident (the event which raises the stakes)
  • Concluding incident (the main event of the story)
  • Catharsis (the resolution of the story)

 

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When you are happy with the 5 sentences and how they flow together, you can then begin to expand each sentence to a paragraph or more. 

Working through this technique will give you those 5 crucial beats/acts which will become the backbone of my story. As you expand, adding in all the events and details, you can do so knowing your story arc will hold everything together.

 

Characters

You may feel it’s better to introduce a section on your characters before you tell your story and use it as a way of introduction. There’s no right or wrong way to do it, and it can depend on the story and how you feel it’s best told.

You should give out a lot of character information when writing the story section, especially in the first act, and that’s important. You want to get into the story as soon as possible.

Writing the character breakdowns after the story section allows you to detach your thinking from the events of the story and just focus on who the characters are. Here, you want to cover their present (age, looks, personality traits), their past (major events and circumstances which have shaped who they are), and their future (what they want, what they need, and what stands in their way).

Try to keep this brief, down to a paragraph for each major character.

Concept

You only need to add a small section on concept or style when writing a treatment for someone else to read. You should keep it brief and only put in notes on major style, concept, and tone ideas.

The tone and concept should already be somewhat clear by this stage, so it’s best not to overwrite this section. If you are writing a treatment to send to a director or producer who knows the movie will be directed by someone other than you, too many styling, technical, or production notes can even be off-putting, whereas a clear and strong storyline without too many production notes, can be seen as an exciting canvas to work on. 

 

What’s the difference between a synopsis and a treatment?

There are many documents that serve different purposes for a screenwriter, depending on your level and how far along you are with your script.

A film synopsis is written either before or after the screenplay and it can be used for pre-planning and/or pitching to financiers and production companies. It’s usually a 500 – 1000 word walkthrough of your film.

You should think of a treatment as a written pitch, detailing every aspect of your story, not just the story.

Here’s a detailed explanation from producer Shane Stanley.

 

Download examples

Below are four treatments from famous films for you to digest. Each different in its approach, you can see how it differs from a synopsis with a more casual tone.

Mr and Mrs Smith | Download

E.T. 2 Nocturnal Fears | Download

Godzilla | Download

The Shining  | Download

 

Nailing the ‘perfect’ treatment

There is no such thing as a perfect treatment really, just as there is no such thing as a perfect script. A treatment is usually seen and understood as an early document, so it’s not expected to be extremely well-polished.

Your starting treatment may well look nothing like the final draft, but the process of using it to rework your story will play a crucial role in development. Its key function is to get you conscious of the overall story arc and what impact every moment has on the shape and flow of your screenplay.

As a pitching document, it is most commonly used to sell a film idea at a very early stage, often looking for funding and support before a first draft is even complete. Its job here is not to tell a perfectly tuned story, but to give quick easy access to the story you are trying to tell.

 

Other documents screenwriters may need

It’s easy to get confused with all the different types of supporting documents you might hear about. Here are some of the most common ones, and what they are best used for:

  • Tagline: A very short and catchy phrase, used as a teaser for a movie (e.g. ‘In space, no one can hear you scream’ – Alien). Usually found on marketing material, such as posters.
  • Logline: A sentence, or very short paragraph, describing the story. Unlike a tagline, the logline should be more descriptive. (e.g. “After a simple jewellery heist goes terribly wrong, the surviving criminals begin to suspect that one of them is a police informant.” – Reservoir Dogs). It’s a great way of giving a quick power pitch when the time/opportunity is brief.
  • Plot summary: A more detailed telling of the story, usually around 1-3 paragraphs in length. It should cover the major events and story arc. This is a great format for pitching your story in a production meeting.
  • Synopsis: A more in-depth telling of the story, including some information on the characters and their motivations. As well as laying out the beats of the main story, it should also cover major subplots. This is usually a one-page document and a great accompaniment when sending your screenplay to an agent or production company.
  • Outline: A scene-by-scene breakdown of a screenplay, describing the key events and moments of each scene, in order. As well as telling the story it also gives insight into the pace and production of the movie. It’s a good way to introduce your script to a director or production team.
  • Pitch: All of the above can be used to pitch a screenwriter’s project, but when we say a ‘pitch document’ we usually refer to a more detailed format with a very concise telling of the story, including technical and production details. 
  • Bible: A bible is suited to TV series. It will focus on the rules of the world and give an in-depth analysis of the characters, their background, and motivations. As well as telling the initial story and its many storylines, it can also suggest future and alternative storylines and show development potential.

It’s useful to have an understanding of the above and when they are best used. A treatment tends to borrow different elements from these documents, depending on what you will use it for.

 

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